Jai Long - Revision history

Soup: /* His Unique Path */

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His Unique Path

Soup: /* Advancing to Underlord */

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Advancing to Underlord

Soup: /* Advancing to Underlord */

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Advancing to Underlord

Soup: /* Duel with Lindon */

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Duel with Lindon

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Duel with Lindon

Soup: /* To Sacred Valley */

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To Sacred Valley

Soup: /* Duel with Lindon */

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Duel with Lindon

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Duel with Lindon

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Duel with Lindon

Soup: /* Retreat West */

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Retreat West

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 ==His Unique Path==
-As a result of the Remnant he adopted when advancing to Lowgold, Jai Long gained the unusual ability to imbue Forged madra with temporary life, specializing in Forged snakes.
+His Path uses Light Aspects. As a result of the Remnant he adopted when advancing to Lowgold, Jai Long gained the unusual ability to imbue Forged madra with temporary life, specializing in Forged snakes.
 {{Quote |Imbuing Forged madra with temporary life is an advanced technique, far beyond Jai Long. He can only produce this result because he absorbed a Remnant from a Path we’ll call.. .unnatural. |([[Blackflame]] Location 1791)}}

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 ==Advancing to Underlord==
-In book 10 [[Reaper]], Jai Long accepts some advice on [[Advancement Level#The Lord Realm|advancement to the Lord Realm]] from Lindon, along with some vital aura treasures. Some months later, with battle raging all around his camp, he accidentally comes upon his own personal Underlord revelation, and soulfire renews him.
+In book 10 [[Reaper]], Jai Long accepts some advice on [[Advancement Level#The Lord Realm|advancement to the Lord Realm]] from Lindon, along with some vital aura treasures. Some months later, with battle raging all around his camp, he accidentally comes upon his own personal Underlord revelation.
 ===His Underlord revelation===
 <blockquote> To show the Jai elders that he was worthy of their attention and respect. He had been so afraid to let them down. The aura around him shivered, and triggered his soulfire. His advancement to Underlord had begun. Jai Long was so stunned that he almost forgot to guide the soulfire through his body. That was it? An idle thought? (Reaper, ch 18)</blockquote>
-He emerges from the transformation. . .unknown. . .to be determined.
+He emerges from the soulfire transformation. . .unknown. . .to be determined.
 *See [[Advancement Level#The Lord Realm|Advancement to the Lord Realm]]

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 ==Advancing to Underlord==
-In book 10 [[Reaper]], Jai Long accepts some advice and sacred treasures from Lindon. Some months later, with battle raging all around his camp, he accidentally comes upon his own personal Underlord Revelation, and soulfire renews him. He emerges from the transformation. . .unknown. . .to be determined.
+In book 10 [[Reaper]], Jai Long accepts some advice on [[Advancement Level#The Lord Realm|advancement to the Lord Realm]] from Lindon, along with some vital aura treasures. Some months later, with battle raging all around his camp, he accidentally comes upon his own personal Underlord revelation, and soulfire renews him.
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 In the Desolate Wilds, Jai Long had sworn to duel [[Lindon]] for killing his friend, Sandviper Kral (see Soulsmith).  So, a year later, Long is a Truegold back home in Serpent’s Grave. Jai Long and Truegold [[Sandviper Gokren]], Kral’s father,  first ambush Lindon, a peak Jade, in the Serpent’s Grave training grounds. During this battle, Lindon and [[Orthos]] kill Gokren, while [[Yerin]] duels Jai Long (see [[Blackflame]], ch 18).
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-Immediately after the surprise attack, Eithan sends Lindon to find [[Jai Chen]], kidnapped by the Patriarch and locked away in a nearby house. When Lindon sees her injured madra channels, he heals her, with help from [[Little Blue]] and his own [[Madra|pure madra]].
+Immediately after the surprise attack, Eithan sends Lindon to find [[Jai Chen]], kidnapped by the Patriarch and locked away in a nearby house. When Lindon sees her injured madra channels, he heals her, with help from [[Little Blue]] and his own [[Pure Madra|pure madra]].
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 Several months later, in the official duel refereed by [[Naru Gwei]], Jai Long, at Truegold, overwhelms Lindon, at Lowgold. However, in gratitude for healing his sister [[Jai Chen]], Long attempts to call the duel finished when Lindon is down. Unfortunately, his Patriarch [[Jai Daishou]] forces him to continue, so he cuts off Lindon’s arm at the elbow. (Skysworn ch 4)

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 ==Duel with Lindon==
-In the Desolate Wilds, Jai Long had sworn to duel [[Lindon]] for killing his friend, Sandviper Kral. So, a year later, Long is a Truegold back home in Serpent’s Grave. Jai Long and Truegold [[Sandviper Gokren]], Kral’s father,  first ambush Lindon, a peak Jade, in the Serpent’s Grave training grounds. During this battle, Lindon and [[Orthos]] kill Gokren, while [[Yerin]] duels Jai Long (see [[Blackflame]], ch 18).
+In the Desolate Wilds, Jai Long had sworn to duel [[Lindon]] for killing his friend, Sandviper Kral (see Soulsmith).  So, a year later, Long is a Truegold back home in Serpent’s Grave. Jai Long and Truegold [[Sandviper Gokren]], Kral’s father,  first ambush Lindon, a peak Jade, in the Serpent’s Grave training grounds. During this battle, Lindon and [[Orthos]] kill Gokren, while [[Yerin]] duels Jai Long (see [[Blackflame]], ch 18).
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 Immediately after the surprise attack, Eithan sends Lindon to find [[Jai Chen]], kidnapped by the Patriarch and locked away in a nearby house. When Lindon sees her injured madra channels, he heals her, with help from [[Little Blue]] and his own [[Madra|pure madra]].

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 ==To Sacred Valley==
-After the duel, the Emperor [[Naru Huan]] censures the entire [[Jai Clan]], because Patriarch Jai Daishou opened the western [[Labyrinth]] — which can attract [[Dreadgod]]s and is off-limits. He also illegally retrieved and employed the [[Archstone]], a restricted ancient weapon. Jai Long and his sister Chen head back west again, towards the Desolate Wilds and beyond. As they head out of town, Lindon gives them a surival pack and tips on how to avoid [[The Bleeding Phoenix]]’s Blood Spawn.
+After the duel, the Emperor [[Naru Huan]] censures the entire [[Jai Clan]], banishing them, because Patriarch Jai Daishou opened the western [[Labyrinth]] — which can attract [[Dreadgod]]s and is off-limits. He also illegally retrieved and employed the [[Archstone]], a restricted ancient weapon. Jai Long and his sister Chen head back west again, towards the Desolate Wilds and beyond. As they head out of town, Lindon gives them a surival pack and tips on how to avoid [[The Bleeding Phoenix]]’s Blood Spawn.
+<blockquote> “You could have killed me, so I appreciate your restraint.” He rubbed at the remainder of his right arm. “Forgive me, but I hope you'll make it far away from here.” Jai Long returned the sentiment. He shrugged the pack over the shoulder that didn't have his sister on it and began to walk away. Jai Chen spoke from his back. “We're going to the very outskirts of imperial territory,” she said. Jai Long hadn't realized she'd regained consciousness. “People there have forgotten about the Empire.” (Skysworn, ch 9)</blockquote>
-Eventually, they reach   [[Sacred Valley]] in the far west, and meet Lindon’s sister, [[Wei Shi Kelsa]], and [[Orthos]]. They help them free [[Wei Shi Seisha]] from imprisonment and slavery.
+Eventually, they reach [[Sacred Valley]] in the far west, and meet Lindon’s sister, [[Wei Shi Kelsa]], and [[Orthos]]. They help them free [[Wei Shi Seisha]] from imprisonment and slavery.
 ==Advancing to Underlord==

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 ==Duel with Lindon==
-In the Desolate Wilds, Jai Long swore to duel [[Lindon]] for killing his friend, Sandviper Kral, so a year later, Long is a Truegold in Serpent’s Grave. Jai Long and Truegold [[Sandviper Gokren]], Kral’s father,  first ambush Lindon, a peak Jade, in the Serpent’s Grave training grounds. During this battle, Lindon and [[Orthos]] kill Gokren, while [[Yerin]] duels Jai Long (see [[Blackflame]], ch 18).
+In the Desolate Wilds, Jai Long swore to duel [[Lindon]] for killing his friend, Sandviper Kral, so a year later, Long is a Truegold in Serpent’s Grave. Jai Long and Truegold [[Sandviper Gokren]], Kral’s father,  first ambush Lindon, a peak Jade, in the Serpent’s Grave training grounds. During this battle, Lindon and [[Orthos]] kill Gokren, while [[Yerin]] duels Jai Long (see [[Blackflame]], ch 18).  soon afterwards, Eithan sends Lindon to find [[Jai Chen]] in a nearby house. When Lindon sees her injured core and channels, he heals her, with help from [[Little Blue]] and his own [[Madra|pure madra]].
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 Later, in the official duel refereed by [[Naru Gwei]], Jai Long, at Truegold, overwhelms Lindon, at Lowgold. However, in gratitude for healing his sister [[Jai Chen]], Long attempts to call the duel finished when Lindon is down. However, his Patriarch [[Jai Daishou]] forces him to continue, so he cuts off Lindon’s arm at the elbow. (Skysworn ch 4)