Makiel - Revision history

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 ==Personality==
-Makiel is something of a leader among the seven Judges, though the Eledari Pact technically gives him no authority over his peers. This is a tradition continued from the original Makiel, who first realized the need for such a pact and organized its creation.
+Makiel is something of a leader among the seven Judges, though the [[Eledari Pact]] technically gives him no authority over his peers. This is a tradition continued from the original Makiel, who first realized the need for such a pact and organized its creation.
 He is rigid and inflexible, utterly dedicated to the enforcement of the rules that protect existence. This mindset has led him to clash with [[Ozriel]], who tends to value his own will over externally imposed guidelines. He has tried many times to recover the Scythe and Mantle of [[Ozriel]] in order to pass the title to a different, more worthy bearer, but the Reaper has eluded or defeated him at every turn.

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 ==Headquarters==
-The main HQ for the entire [[Abidan]] Court is on the world of Sanctum, but Makiel moved his own Hounds of Fate operational center far away, to Outpost 01, also called Oversight.
+The main HQ for the entire [[Abidan]] Court is on the world of Sanctum, but Makiel moved his own Hounds of Fate operational center far away, to Outpost 01, also called [[Oversight]].
 *Outpost 01

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 *weapon = The Sword of the First Judge (two-handed)
 *presence = Purple Eye
 ==Hound Division==

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 ==Tags==
-*Rank: Abidan Judge
+*rank: Abidan Judge
 *designation = zero-zero-one / #001
 *office = The Hound
 *symbol = three-headed dog
 *division = Fate
-*HQ = Outpost01 : Oversight
+*hq = Outpost01 : Oversight
-*weapon_/_tool = The Sword of the First Judge (two-handed)
+*weapon = The Sword of the First Judge (two-handed)
 *presence = Purple Eye

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 | position           = Abidan Judge 001: The Hound
 }}
 ==Hound Division==

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	No wonder Makiel’s Hounds worshiped him so. He was worth a division all on his own.		No wonder Makiel’s Hounds worshiped him so. He was worth a division all on his own.
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		+	==Weapon==
		+	Massive two-handed sword, passed down from the first Makiel. <blockquote> Makiel met the blow with the Sword of the First Judge, the weapon that had been the symbol of order since the ancient Abidan had risen from Cradle so long ago. (Bloodline ch 18)</blockquote>

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	He is rigid and inflexible, utterly dedicated to the enforcement of the rules that protect existence. This mindset has led him to clash with [[Ozriel]], who tends to value his own will over externally imposed guidelines. He has tried many times to recover the Scythe and Mantle of [[Ozriel]] in order to pass the title to a different, more worthy bearer, but the Reaper has eluded or defeated him at every turn.		He is rigid and inflexible, utterly dedicated to the enforcement of the rules that protect existence. This mindset has led him to clash with [[Ozriel]], who tends to value his own will over externally imposed guidelines. He has tried many times to recover the Scythe and Mantle of [[Ozriel]] in order to pass the title to a different, more worthy bearer, but the Reaper has eluded or defeated him at every turn.
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		+	<blockquote> “What are my odds of getting two other Judges to work with me against the Vroshir directly?” [Not high.] Suriel preferred her Presence to answer numerically where possible, even when regarding scenarios that were technically incalculable. When it didn’t, that meant the scenario was truly uncertain. [It is a shame that those who rise to become Judges tend to be unusually individualistic,] her Presence continued. [Forceful. Difficult to persuade, even with objective facts.] (Reaper ch 2)</blockquote>

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 ==Descriptions==
-The First Judge himself had an unremarkable appearance. He looked like a natural human, as though his genetics had remained the same since birth. [[Suriel]], and every other [[Abidan]] she knew, had altered themselves in some way to improve their performance. Rumor said that Makiel never had, and that he worked solely on natural talent, but of course he would never allow a scan to confirm those rumors.
+Makiel the Hound of Fate, The First Judge himself, had an unremarkable appearance. He looked like a natural human, as though his genetics had remained the same since birth. [[Suriel]], and every other [[Abidan]] she knew, had altered themselves in some way to improve their performance. Rumor said that Makiel never had, and that he worked solely on natural talent, but of course he would never allow a scan to confirm those rumors.
 He had dark brown skin, slightly wrinkled like a man in his fifties, and silver at the wings of his black, short hair. He was trim and solidly built, with a square jaw; He looked like a soldier. Only his eyes stood out, blazing a bright violet.

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-The story of each universe is written in Fate.
+==Hound Division==
-     Fate governs the natural lifespan of each Iteration. It isn't a detailed plan that determines every action of each person, but rather a force like gravity that pushes a world toward a healthy life ending in that Iteration's natural death.
+The story of each universe is written in Fate. Fate governs the natural lifespan of each Iteration. It isn't a detailed plan that determines every action of each person, but rather a force like gravity that pushes a world toward a healthy life ending in that Iteration's natural death.
-     Since humans tie the universe to the Way, people figure prominently in Fate. One individual life is unlikely to affect the destiny of an entire Iteration, but their actions might be a necessary step toward a world's continued existence. Or its end.
+Since humans tie the universe to the Way, people figure prominently in Fate. One individual life is unlikely to affect the destiny of an entire Iteration, but their actions might be a necessary step toward a world's continued existence. Or its end.
 ==Descriptions==
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 He had dark brown skin, slightly wrinkled like a man in his fifties, and silver at the wings of his black, short hair. He was trim and solidly built, with a square jaw; He looked like a soldier. Only his eyes stood out, blazing a bright violet.
 ==Ability==