Path of the Stellar Spear - Revision history

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History of Path

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History of Path

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 The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is used by the [[Jai Clan]]. This Path branched from the original [[Path of the Broken Star]] at some point. Although weaker then the original path, it's easier to apply to real-world situations and has more lenient madra control requirements.
-==Jai Long==
+==Jai members==
 Old [[Jai Daishou]] mastered this Path. Young [[Jai Long]] practices a variation of the Path of the Stellar Spear, because he adopted a nasty twisty snaky Remant when he advanced to Lowgold. So, his Path may be more like the Broken Star than anyone knows. Or not. (Just a guess.) For more info on his unique Path, see his page [[Jai Long]].

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 ==Jai Long==
-[[Jai Long]] practices a variation of the Path of the Stellar Spear, because he adopted a nasty twisty snaky Remant when he advanced to Lowgold. So, his Path may be more like the Broken Star than anyone knows. Or not. (Just a guess.) For more info on his unique Path, see his page [[Jai Long]].
+Old [[Jai Daishou]] mastered this Path. Young [[Jai Long]] practices a variation of the Path of the Stellar Spear, because he adopted a nasty twisty snaky Remant when he advanced to Lowgold. So, his Path may be more like the Broken Star than anyone knows. Or not. (Just a guess.) For more info on his unique Path, see his page [[Jai Long]].
 ==Aura Chamber==

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 ==History of Path ==
-The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is used by the [[Jai Clan]]. This Path branched from the original Path of the Broken Star at some point. Although weaker then the original path, it's easier to apply to real-world situations and has more lenient madra control requirements.
+The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is used by the [[Jai Clan]]. This Path branched from the original [[Path of the Broken Star]] at some point. Although weaker then the original path, it's easier to apply to real-world situations and has more lenient madra control requirements.
 ==Jai Long==

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 ==Jai Long==
-[[Jai Long]] practices a variation of the Path of the Stellar Spear, because he adopted a nasty twisty snaky Remant when he advanced to Lowgold. So, his Path may be more like the Broken Star than anyone knows. Or not. (Just a guess.)
+[[Jai Long]] practices a variation of the Path of the Stellar Spear, because he adopted a nasty twisty snaky Remant when he advanced to Lowgold. So, his Path may be more like the Broken Star than anyone knows. Or not. (Just a guess.) For more info on his unique Path, see his page [[Jai Long]].
 ==Aura Chamber==

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 ==History of Path ==
-The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is used by the Jai clan. This Path branched from the original Path of the Broken Star at some point. Although weaker then the original path, it's easier to apply to real-world situations and has more lenient madra control requirements.
+The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is used by the [[Jai Clan]]. This Path branched from the original Path of the Broken Star at some point. Although weaker then the original path, it's easier to apply to real-world situations and has more lenient madra control requirements.
 ==Jai Long==

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 {{Cradle NavBox}}
-The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is the signature path of the Jai Clan. The path branched from the Path of the Broken Star at some point. Although weaker then the original path, it's easier to apply to real-world situations and has more lenient madra control requirements. [[Jai Long]] practices a variation of the Path of the Stellar Spear, because he adopted into a nasty Remant when he advanced to Lowgold. So, his Path may be more like the Broken Star than anyone knows. Just a guess.
+The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is the signature path of the Jai clan in the [[Blackflame Empire]]
 ==Aura Chamber==
-The place to practice and cycle aura for this Path is on the edge of Serpent’s Grave, in the [[Blackflame Empire]]. This is /was the primary city of the Jai clan, until they were exiled to the Desolate Wilds.  In Reaper, book 10, the emperor grants the [[Twin Star Sect]] a campus and building out there. [[Jai Chen]] helps manage the sect and her big brother  [[Jai Long]] practices his techniques in the rich aura chamber.
+The place to practice and cycle aura for this Path is on the edge of Serpent’s Grave, in the [[Blackflame Empire]]. This is /was the primary city of the Jai clan, until they were exiled to the Desolate Wilds.  In Reaper, book 10, the emperor grants the [[Twin Star Sect]] a campus and building out there. [[Jai Chen]] helps manage the sect and her big brother [[Jai Long]] practices his techniques in the rich aura chamber.
 <blockquote >In the headquarters of the Twin Star Sect, on the edge of Serpent’s Grave, Jai Long completed his morning cycling. This aura chamber was perfect for him, having once belonged to the Jai clan; it was filled with glowing blades that saturated the air with the power of light and swords. (Reaper, ch 10) </blockquote >

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 **Star Lance:
 ***Launches a bright blast of light and sword madra from the tip of a spear.
 <blockquote>''"He whipped Stellar Spear madra in a line—the Star Lance was the simplest Striker technique possible, but also the fastest."''<ref name=":0" /></blockquote>
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 **Fall of Seven Stars (Jai Daishou Only):
 ***This technique is described as a fan of forged spears that blaze with sword aura.  Each of the seven attacks are then spread out at different angles and launched at different timings to prevent dodging or escape.
 <blockquote>''"The cliff shone with white light like a dawning star, invisible gouges appeared in the dirt from the force of his sword aura, and his spiritual sense trembled with the power of his seven spears. Jai Daishou used this technique to level fortress walls, not to kill individual enemies."'' <ref name=":0">Blackflame, Chapter 20</ref></blockquote>
 ==Cycling Techniques:==

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 {{Cradle NavBox}}
-The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is the signature path of the Jai Clan. The path branched from the Path of the Broken Star at some point. Although weaker then the original path, it's easier to apply to real-world situations and has more lenient madra control requirements. [[Jai Long]] Practices a twisted version of the Path of the Stellar Spear known as [[Path of the Stellar Spear 2.0]].
+The '''Path of the Stellar Spear''' is the signature path of the Jai Clan. The path branched from the Path of the Broken Star at some point. Although weaker then the original path, it's easier to apply to real-world situations and has more lenient madra control requirements. [[Jai Long]] practices a [[Path of the Stellar Spear (Jai Long)|twisted version of the Path of the Stellar Spear]].
 ==Techniques:==
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 *Enforcer:
 **Flowing Starlight:
-***The user circulates light-aspect mandra, and a bright pattern covers the users skin, enhancing his movement speed and perception.
+***The user circulates light-aspect madra, and a bright pattern covers the users skin, enhancing his movement speed and perception.
 **Star's Edge:
 ***The user, reinforces his weapon, a bright pattern covers the weapon , resulting in a "deadly star" at the end of his spear.
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 *Forger:
 **No known techniques.
 ==Cycling Techniques:==