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Nexk: /* Chapter 7 */

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Chapter 7

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Nexk: /* Chapter 24 */

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Chapter 24

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Nexk: edits for consistency

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edits for consistency

Nexk at 00:07, 18 April 2024

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Nexk: Ch 46 - END!!!

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Ch 46 - END!!!

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Nexk: Ch 45

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Ch 45

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-Varic runs away from the Iron Legion Hunter ships. After a subspace jump, Varic ends up between two planets. The Hunter ships catch up and Varic fights them off, while keeping his own ship together. The Iron Legion will be soon though, so he heads to one of the planets to look for [[The Last Horizon]].
+Varic runs away from the Iron Legion Hunter ships. After a subspace jump, Varic ends up between two planets. The Hunter ships catch up and Varic fights them off, while keeping his own ship together. The Iron Legion will return soon though, so he heads to one of the planets to look for [[The Last Horizon]].
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 *[[Mell]] (POV)
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 Back on the ship, Varic, Raion, and Sola question Omega. Omega continuously tries to disturb the three, but is only successful with disgusting Raion. Varic offers Omega a seat on the ship in exchange for his cooperation, to Raion's horror. Omega would be allowed to join the crew for three months under the condition that he cannot hurt or betray the rest of the crew. Omega asks for time to think, and with that Varic and the rest leave him in his cell. Sola and Raion question why they should keep Omega on board. Varic explains that he still has information. He decides the next course of action is to pretend to save his father.
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 Meanwhile, Benri finds himself in the presence of the Iron King, who welcomes him. The King describes the fun he is having controlling the Iron Legion. Benri questions why he is here, and the Iron King responds that he wants Benri's help to take over ''The Last Horizon''. Benri is irritated to learn that Varic is the Captain, but fears what the Iron King could do with ''The Last Horizon''. The Iron King insists that he only wants to own the galaxy, and not convert everyone into the Iron Legion. Benri and Varic would stay alive and be a part of ''The Last Horizon's'' crew, while the Iron King fills the rest of the seats. Benri accepts the deal, not having another choice. The Iron King expresses his excitement on having cornered the starship and the possibility of losing the battle. He shares a small glimpse of what he experiences while controlling the Iron Legion to Benri, which almost overwhelms him, before focusing on only the system ''The Last Horizon'' is in. Benri releases the Mirror of Silence to the Iron King, who uses it to multiply the fleet surrounding the starship.
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-Varic, Sola, and Raion arrive on a [[Galactic Union]] colony to drop off the survivors from the Hive. Varic goes sightseeing and looks through magical projects he could help with. Sola runs errands and collects her bounty for the survivors and the Hive. Raion goes out bounty hunting for criminals. After about an hour, Varic reinvites Sola to ''The Last Horizon''. Though still hesitant, she eventually agrees to further discuss on her ship. Once there, Varic gives an explanation about the situation, and reassures her that with Horizon, it could be enough to defeat the [[Iron Legion]]. Sola still seems uncertain, so Varic sends her video files from the time he destroyed the [[Iron King]] and his meeting with Horizon. Finally, she makes the choice to talk to ''The Last Horizon'', and together they teleport onto the ship.
+Varic, Sola, and Raion arrive on a [[Galactic Union]] colony to drop off the survivors from the Hive. Varic looks around the colony while Sola runs errands and Raion goes out bounty hunting for criminals. Varic reinvites Sola to ''The Last Horizon.'' She eventually agrees to further discuss on her ship. Varic gives an explanation about the situation, and reassures her that with Horizon, it could be enough to defeat the [[Iron Legion]]. Sola makes the choice to talk to Horizon, and together they teleport onto the ship. They appear in the crew initiation ritual room, along with Raion. Sola is starled, and Horizon explains that she is a [[World Spirit]], and is offering Sola the third seat in the crew. Horizon explains the system of crew mate requests, and Varic already chose the defeat of the Iron Legion. Sola ends up signing an open-ended contract where she could pick a request at a later date. With that, Sola becomes the Sword of The Last Horizon.
 After that, Horizon leads everyone to their rooms. Varic is semi-disappointed with his, but Horizon quickly impresses him by showing that the rooms are customizable. After his long day, Varic finally falls asleep.
-When he wakes up and enters the bridge, Raion and Sola are already discussing plans on what Hives to destroy. Sola insists on a more strategic approach, while Raion wants everyone take out a Hive. Sola points out the flaws in his plans, but Raion ''believes''. Varic clarifies information on Horizon's systems, and supports Sola's approach. He asks what their plan is, which Sola explains that there has been suspicious Iron Legion activity on a system. Varic takes this as an opportunity to recommend Tanner Hall as a pilot, though no one seems particularly impressed by him. Sola insists they can do better, and Varic decides to give the matter more time. Sola question if Varic will participate in the plan, but Varic apologetically explains that he has class to teach.
+When he wakes up, Raion and Sola are already discussing plans on what Hives to destroy. Varic takes this as an opportunity to recommend Tanner Hall as a pilot, though no one seems particularly impressed by him. Varic decides to give the matter more time. Sola question if Varic will participate in the plan, but Varic apologetically explains that he has class to teach.
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 Varic arrived at the Magic Tower using Horizon's long-range teleportation, much to the confusion of the other staff. Varic heads towards his classroom, in a good mood, when he runs into Director Porellus. Porellus happily greets Varic and welcomes him back, to Varic's confusion and suspicion. Porellus leaves, and Varic speculates on his unusual behaviors.
-Varic enters his classroom, noting how there are more students present than usual and their unusual disappointment when he changes the lesson plans. He asks if they saw him fight. The students confirm this by exploding with questions and comments. Varic quiets them, then informs them that he plans to teach them to fight. He starts by questioning Mariala on her motivations and goals, and how she could react in case of a big threat. After taking some answers, Varic explains that there are limits to what a person can do. Varic then moves on to sharing information with Mariala on where to find and study magic, and how to define herself to the Aether. He proceeds to give individualized and secret information to each of his students. He was inspired to do this after becoming the Captain of ''The Last Horizon''.
+Varic enters his classroom, and it is revealed that the students saw him fight. Varic quiet their excitement, then informs them that he plans to teach them to fight. He starts by questioning Mariala on her motivations and goals, and how she could react in case of a big threat. After taking some answers, Varic explains that there are limits to what a person can do. Varic then moves on to sharing information with Mariala on where to find and study magic, and how to define herself to the Aether. He proceeds to give individualized and secret information to each of his students. He was inspired to do this after becoming the Captain of ''The Last Horizon''.
-As he was sharing the information, Varic noticed that the wards he placed inside the Magic Tower were breaking, which meant they were under attack. He orders the students to their stations.
+Varic noticea that the wards he placed inside the Magic Tower were breaking, and they were under attack. He orders the students to their stations.
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-Varic conducts the ritual that summons five different lives into him and becomes a sixfold Archmage.
+On the planet [[Nezarin]], Varic and [[Vallenar Corporation]] employees set up a ritual. Benri arrives, and talks to Varic. They start the ritual that should summons multiple different magical displines into Varic. The spell goes awry, and Varic ends up living five different lives during the ritual where he sees the galaxy end. He then passes out.
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-Varic wakes up from the ritual, and Benri orders safety restraints onto him. Varic escapes easily, and after a quick talk, Varic leaves.
+Benri observes the ritual, excited at the fact that Varic became a sixfold Archmage. Teranon is concerned about the outcome, and after showing Benri his analysis spell, Benri is also concerned. Varic wakes up from the ritual, and Benri orders safety restraints onto him. Varic escapes easily, and briefly tells Benri what he saw. Benri tries to get him to explain, but Varic leaves.
 ==Chapter 3==
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 *[[Sola Kalter]] (POV)
 *[[Varic Vallenar]]
-*[[Raion Raithe]] (Not named)
+*[[Raion Raithe]]
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-Sola is fighting a [[Iron Legion|Reaver]] and is guiding four survivors to escape the Hive they are in. After Sola destroys some Pawns, the Reaver runs its blade through Sola's stomach. With her armour, she is fine, though a young girl, one of the survivors, fears for her. The group falls into a trap made by a [[Iron Legion|Bishop]] meant for her, and Sola prepares to fight, believing there will be no survivors. Suddenly, a [[Visiri]] punches his way in, with an Archmage following. Varic, the Archmage, stops an attack. Sola underestimates them, feeling that Varic is too unconcerned, and the Visiri too stupid. Varic then stops the Hive from self-destructing. With that, Sola tells Varic to run, and pulls out Worldslayer, preparing to attack the Bishop. The Visiri instead destroys the Bishop, and Sola feels stupid for worrying. Sola passes out from her injuries.
+Sola is fighting a [[Iron Legion|Reaver]] and is guiding survivors to escape the Hive they are in. Sola gets injured, though with her armour, she is fine. The group falls into a trap made by a [[Iron Legion|Bishop]] meant for her, and Sola prepares to fight, believing there will be no survivors. Suddenly, a [[Visiri]] punches his way in, with an Archmage following. Varic, the Archmage, stops an attack. Sola underestimates them, feeling that Varic is too unconcerned, and the Visiri too stupid. Varic then stops the Hive from self-destructing. With that, Sola tells Varic to run, and pulls out Worldslayer, preparing to attack the Bishop. The Visiri instead destroys the Bishop, and Sola feels stupid for worrying. Sola passes out from her injuries.
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-Varic observes Sola's broken suit while healing her with his Sealing magic. Sola wakes up, and immediately puts a gun to his temple, though Raion grabs it. Varic, while speaking in the Lichborn language, reassures Sola that he is healing her, and that he is a friend. Varic currently has everyone inside a barrier, while Pawns on the outside swarm.
+Varic heals Sola with his Sealing magic. She wakes up and immediately threatens him with a gun, but Raion grabs it. Varic reassures Sola that he is a friend. Varic currently has everyone inside a barrier, while Pawns on the outside swarm. Sola hands Varic her Pyre, before killing herself with a gun. Sola revives at the Pyre. She questions Varic on the durability of the barrier, before showing the plan to return to her ship. Raion and Sola finally introduce each other, though Sola is hesitant on Raion's abilities and character. With that, they begin the plan to reach the ship. Sola and Raion keep the  hall clear while Varic keeps the survivors safe. The Bishop gets through Varic's seals to keep the Hive from self-destructing, and they begin to run towards the ship. Varic realizes how reassuring it is to have allies he can count on, thinking he's safe at last.
 Meanwhile, the Iron King awakens, revived by a device commissioned by the previous Iron King. He thinks about how this device makes him unique, and potentially immortal. He starts by accessing the [[Iron Legion]] information network and hivemind, learning about the human, and his new starship, who destroyed his body.

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 This page contains a chapter by chapter summary of '''''[[The Captain]]''''', book one in the [[The Last Horizon Series]].
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 ==Epilogue==
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+Varic, Sola, and Omega shoot and attack at the remaining pieces of the Iron King until there is nothing left. Varic keeps casting spells to make sure he is dead. Varic then plans to clean out the rest of the Iron Legion, when they receive a transmission from Shyrax. Varic changes plans to pick up the rest of the crew.
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 Varic questions Benri's presence. Horizon removes a parasite off of Benri, and explains that it was a plan from the Iron King. Varic confirms the Iron King's death, but Sola is still uneasy. Varic motions for Horizon to get rid of the cocoon when she has the time, while Sola contemplates while looking at her Pyre. Varic and Sola talk, and Sola mentions that the wizard that had given her the spell had told her she would die in endless battle. Varic discusses the implications of this, and they suspect the Iron King survived. Varic, Sola, and Horizon all begin to target the cocoon, but are unable to prevent the Iron King emerging from it. The Iron King takes Eurias from Varic and Worldslayer from Sola. Horizon tries to retaliate, but the Iron King expands his magic to claim ''The Last Horizon''.
 ==Chapter 45==